Included are four pieces of writing I have done this semester, my first year of academy. I feel they are my best pieces I have ever done in English language and represent the quality of my work as a whole. They consist of: A letter for Cousin Harry A memoir: my young dream A film review: “Bowling for Columbine” by Michael Moore A proposal research for cafeteria My first piece Is my “unsatisfying” piece. It Is the letter I did for Cousin Harry. The reason for my dissatisfaction Is I felt my story wasn’t presented very well.
Also, I felt my paper didn’t have a real strong thesis or writer’s voice even though it was interesting. I personally believe that was perhaps because of my first experience in English writing since I was in U. S. “The memoir” I had fun creating it and I felt it evidences my descriptive powers and attention to the subtle differences of words. My third piece, the movie review, is one of the best I’ve written. I thought I analyzed the film well and presented my analysis in a clear, focused paper.
Writing reviews of alms has become much easier for me over my first year of academy. I feel that I can write them much more efficiently and that they are more interesting to read. This may also indicate that as a person I think a lot more about the information I digest. The final piece is a group effort. We decided to make a proposal about the cafeteria problem because we believed that was the major issue at SST. Francis College. We were enjoying doing this project and I felt excited about talking to the students and rearing their opinions.
I personally think we did a good Job of presenting this project, although we did not have enough time to go In more depth. Actually, It was fun to do this. Overall, I feel that the last semester have seen me grow as a writer.. I can also express my thoughts and Ideas with more clarity. Thoughts and Ideas have come In Increasing quantity and depth. I feel these works all have quality writing In them and so submit them as a reflection of my ability David Moore
Self – Reflection By consolation My first piece is my “unsatisfying” piece. It is the letter I did for Cousin Harry. The reason for my dissatisfaction is I felt my story wasn’t presented very well. Also, I felt although we did not have enough time to go in more depth. Actually, it was fun to do express my thoughts and ideas with more clarity. Thoughts and ideas have come in increasing quantity and depth. I feel these works all have quality writing in them and so submit them as a reflection
